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Normale Version: Hasta Ahora (2023)
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Lucas und Bosco, beide 15 Jahre alt, sind Freunde seit Kindertagen. Das Ende der Welt naht, und ihre Familien werden sich versammeln, um ihre letzten Momente gemeinsam zu verbringen. Lucas muss Bosco seine Gefühle gestehen, bevor die Erde untergeht. 

Lucas and Bosco, both 15, are lifelong friends. The end of the world is approaching, and their families will gather to spend their last moments together. Lucas will have to confess his feelings to Bosco before the earth explodes. 

Liked the idea in general. The implementation was a tad weird, though.
Maybe it’s just me, but I felt it required some refining – a clearer plot and perhaps more emotional input.
If I’m being honest, the dialogues are downright crappy and not really helping in getting the whole picture.
Perhaps adding some more suspense as the end-of-the-world backdrop and throwing in some clues about Bosco’s Italian ‘special friend’ as well as focusing more on Lucas’ reaction to that would do the trick.
Nonetheless, an interesting find. 


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